Writing Your Personal Statement

Telling Your Story

Your personal statement is a very important piece of your application and should be given a high degree of attention in the process. You can begin creating your first draft as soon as you want, but serious work should be done a few months before applying.

The essay is a great place to tell your story. By this we mean showing the admissions committee more about who you are by choosing experiences you have had and telling a well-crafted story that contains a theme synthesized throughout each paragraph.

Creating A Theme

As soon as you arrive at UCD (or as soon as you read this), buy yourself a journal and begin jotting down all of your impressions on your experiences.

First, make a list of all of the most impactful moments in your life. Start from childhood and go through college. Write a paragraph about each, describing what you did (your actions, behavior, decision making) and what you thought as a result. How did that experience move you to a new place?

Read through all of those impactful moments and try to find a theme. What concept is infused throughout your life? Is there a pattern or reoccuring series of events that has appeared in your life? Do past events parallel with current activities? Try to name those. Once you name it, what does that mean about your future plans?

HPA Tips

  • Don't use your essay as a list of experiences. Your experiences page or resume will tell them what you have done. Use your essay to tell them something they do not already know about you.

  • Think about your essay as a piece of writing. A good piece of writing has a theme. When you are beginning a draft, write several paragraphs of incidents in your life that were defining moments. Read these paragraphs over and over until you discover a concept or theme synthesized through more than one. Once you have identified a common thread in 2-3 stories, rewrite it using those stories and with that theme in mind.

  • You do not need to tell your audience anything. Show them through your story what you are about.

  • Do not use your essay to criticize medicine today. You are not going to change the way medicine is practiced single-handedly. If you want to point out flaws in current practice or society, be quick to acknowledge how you will be a part of the solution, not the solution itself. (An example, "I have seen many patients suffer and I want to stop my patients from suffering." -You won't be able to stop your patients from suffering but you can be sure to comfort each patient and offer accurate information and appropriate advice.

  • It's ok to address systemic problems, but do so through your story. Your essay is not the place to spout your agenda.

  • Just avoid the "I want to help people" theme if possible. There has to be more to you than that. Think harder.

Resources To Help

UWP 104F: Writing in the Health Professions

Keep in mind that the 104F course does not focus solely on the personal statement. This class will produce a first draft. You will need to spend a lot of time on your draft after the class. If you wish to take this course, we recommend taking it no later than the fall quarter before you plan to apply.

Health Professions Advising

We offer several workshops for personal statements. We can also visit pre-health clubs to do private workshops events. Here is what we have scheduled this Winter 2016 quarter:

  • January 28 at 3:30 p.m. in Art 204
  • February 3 (Nursing) at 6:10 p.m. in Wellman 234
  • February 9 at 3:30 p.m. in Wellman 119

Timeline

You can begin thinking about your essay as early as your first year. Your personal statement will take many shapes and forms over the years as you grow and experience new things. If you are in the early stages of deciding to pursue a health profession, sit down and try to answer the question "Why do you want to be a _____?" Keep your writing in your HPA folder and revisit it from time to time on your educational journey.

You should begin seriously working on your statement around six months away from the due date.  Allow yourself plenty of time to revise. A good piece of writing will take many revisions with several sets of eyes. Around January of the year you are applying, you can schedule an appointment with an advisor in HPA to discuss your essay.

Supplemental content

Personal Statements/Essay

Why is the personal statement important to your application?
The personal statement is your first chance to provide health profession school committees with subjective information about your qualifications and your reasons for choosing a particular career. In other words, the personal statement is your initial opportunity to present yourself as an interesting and unique applicant who deserves a closer look.
When should I begin writing my personal statement?
The personal statement should be a reflective, well-polished document. You can create your first draft as soon as you want. The more time you give yourself to get feedback and revise the better. The Office of Health Professions Advising is happy to read your essay and give you feedback, but please make the appointment at least a month before your deadline. Revisions take time.